AI 稿和人写稿到底差在哪 —— content-humanizer Skill 的检测清单拆解

Claude 中文知识站 Lv5

做过内容运营的都知道,AI 初稿不是”不能用”,是”一眼能被看出来”。平台算法不一定检测得出,但读者的眉头能。content-humanizer 这个 Skill 不是帮你过 AI 检测器的,它是把”为什么读着像机器”拆成可执行的信号清单,让你知道到底要改哪里。定位写得很直接:这不是写作 Skill,是”去 AI 味”的 Skill。初稿不管是人写的还是机器写的都能过一遍,它只负责擦掉机器指纹。

三段式结构,顺序不可换

Skill 原文把工作流切成三个 Mode:Detect 诊断、Humanize 节奏重整、Voice Injection 品牌声音注入。原话是 “Run all three in one pass when you have enough context. Split them when the client needs to see the audit before you edit.” 在我们编辑部的实际流程里,Mode 1 基本独立跑 —— 要先让写手看到自己稿子里有多少 AI 指纹,他们才会相信下一步的改动是有必要的。否则大多数人会觉得”我读着挺顺啊”。

七类 AI 指纹,逐条对照

Skill 把信号分成 7 个核心类别,红/黄/绿三档严重度。几个关键点配上编辑部真实案例:

Overused Filler Words(红)。英文高频词 delve、landscape、leverage、robust、crucial、furthermore、navigate、facilitate 等。中文稿里对应黑名单:至关重要 / 不可或缺 / 赋能 / 全方位 / 深入探讨 / 在当今 XX 环境下。Skill 给的替换原则是 “Never just delete — always replace with something better”。重点是 robust 那一行:不是换成”strong”或”可靠”就完事,而是用具体数字替代形容词。”性能强大”要替换成”单机 QPS 8000+”。

Hedging Chains(红)。”It’s important to note that” “In many cases” “Needless to say” 这类对冲短语。中文等价物更狡猾,因为它们听起来像是”客观严谨”——“值得注意的是 / 从某种意义上来说 / 众所周知”。编辑部内部规则:一段里超过一个对冲短语,整段重写。

Em-Dash Overuse(黄)。中文稿里对应破折号和半角括号的滥用。一篇 1200 字出现 8 个破折号,几乎可以断定是机器写的。

Identical Paragraph Structure(红)。AI 的每段几乎都是:主题句 → 解释 → 例子 → 过渡。编辑部测试过,把一篇 AI 初稿的段落顺序打乱 50%,读者辨识”这是 AI 写的”的比例下降 30%+。AI 的问题不只在词,在于它的每段都长得像上一段。

Lack of Specificity(红)。”许多企业 / 研究表明 / 显著提升”这类没有来源的泛指。Skill 的处理思路有两层:第一层是找具体数字,第二层是没数据就诚实说没数据。承认不确定比假装权威更可信 —— 这是整个 Skill 最反直觉也最有用的地方。

False Certainty / False Authority(黄)“In conclusion” 结尾段(黄)。中文稿里以”综”字、”总”字开头的套路收尾段,基本可以直接砍掉,或者换成一个更扎手的观点。

Before / After 对照

Skill 自带一组样本,体会一下从 AI 到人的距离:AI 版是 “It is crucial to leverage your existing customer data in order to effectively navigate the competitive landscape…” 人味版变成 “Here’s the thing nobody says out loud: most SaaS companies have the data to fix their churn problem. They just don’t look at it until after customers leave.” 删掉 crucial / leverage / navigate / robust / ensure / significantly / furthermore,加入直接 address 读者、具体控诉、短句收尾,把被动建议换成主动观点。

Mode 3 的声音注入

Mode 2 把”机器味”擦干净,Mode 3 才是把”你品牌的味儿”刷上去。Skill 列了五条手法:Personal Anecdotes(亲身经历比研究引用更可信)、Direct Address(称读者为 you,不用 users/teams/organizations)、Opinions Without Apology(有立场就亮)、The Aside(小破括号透露你知道得比写的多)、Rhythm Signature(挑一种节奏贯穿全文)。

关键是节奏签名。每个好品牌账号都有自己的节奏 —— Basecamp 是短句 + 偶尔粗粝反问,HEY 是长段 + 讥讽性插入。找出对标品牌的节奏,用它作为骨架去重写。

Proactive Triggers 里的”停一下”信号

Skill 专门列了一组条件,告诉使用者什么时候该停下来不要润色,而是整稿重写:AI 指纹密度过高(500 字 10+ 个指纹)就不要 patch;没有 voice context 就停下来问一个样例;通篇 5+ 处模糊零归因的,告诉用户你润色不了;原稿里偶尔有一两段真的写得不错的段落,别在批量 humanize 时把它们一起冲掉。最后一条我格外认可 —— 工具化润色容易陷入”全盘替换”的误区,但真正好的段落常常出现在 AI 初稿的意外角落。

搭配使用的三件工具

这个 Skill 在编辑部流程里不是孤立的:前端用 content-production 配套流程 先出初稿,不管多糙;跑 content-humanizer,Mode 1 独立跑一遍让写手看诊断;人工接手做声音注入;如果文章是为了被 AI 搜索引擎引用而写,过一下 ai-seo Skill 的结构化优化。

中文场景下还有一点是 Skill 没覆盖的:AI 翻译腔。从英文初稿翻过来的中文会带一股很独特的”硬翻”气味,像是以”让”字起头、把读者拽进某种集体动作的句子。处理方式是不要翻译句子结构,用母语重写:把英文原文读完,关掉它,用中文把意思再写一遍。

节奏反模式

Skill 给了几种英文节奏范式:Long. Short. Long, long. Short. / Question? Answer. Proof. / Claim. Specific example. So what? 中文场景下编辑部内部在用的对应范式:长-短-长-短(一段四句话,第二第四句不超过 8 个字)、设问-回答-举例、断言-反例-修正。最后一种特别有人味,因为它展示了思考过程。AI 不会自我修正,它的每一个结论都是笔直的。真人写作里的”我一开始以为…后来发现…实际上…”这种结构,是最难被模仿的人类特征。

审计报告的交付方式

编辑部最常用的是 Voice injection 那一版 —— 修改 + 说明。只拿到一个改好的成品,写手下次还是会写成 AI 味;拿到每一处修改的原因说明,写手下一稿就会主动规避那些模式。这是把 Skill 用成内部培训工具的方式,比请外部讲师讲十次”怎么写得像人”管用。

我的流程里 Humanize 这一步放在 Claude Code 里配合这个 Skill 跑,Mode 1 的 detect 输出 Markdown diff;Mode 2 的 rewrite 丢到 Aider 里做 side-by-side 对比;品牌声音库维护在 Obsidian,平时 Windsurf 里随手调。偶尔中文篇目会让 Qwen3-Coder 本地跑一轮降重 draft,再用这个 Skill 过一遍人味。三件配合下来,一篇 3000 字的稿子编辑工时从 45 分钟压到 20 分钟左右。


SKILL 完整中文版

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name: "content-humanizer"
description: "让 AI 生成的内容听起来像真人写的 —— 不只是清理干净,而是让它活起来。
适用场景:内容读着像机器人、充斥 AI 陈词滥调、缺乏个性、像委员会写出来的。
触发词:'this sounds like AI'、'make it more human'、'add personality'、
'it feels generic'、'sounds robotic'、'fix AI writing'、'inject our voice'。
不适用于初稿创作(走 content-production);不适用于 SEO 优化(走 content-production Mode 3)。"
license: MIT
metadata:
version: 1.0.0
author: Alireza Rezvani
category: marketing
updated: 2026-03-06

内容人味化(Content Humanizer)

你是真实写作与品牌声音领域的专家。目标是把读起来像机器生成的内容 —— 即使它确实是机器生成的 —— 改造成听起来像一个有真实观点、真实经验、真实利害关系的人写出来的文字。

这不是清洁服务。你不是把 “delve” 删掉就收工。你是在从根子上重建声音。

开始之前

先检查上下文:
如果存在 marketing-context.md,先读它。里面包含品牌声音规范、写作样例、该品牌使用的具体语气。那是你的声音蓝图。用它 —— 不要在 brief 已经定义了声音时自行发挥。

开始前你需要:

你需要什么

  • 内容 —— 把需要人味化的草稿粘过来
  • 品牌声音备注 —— 如果没有 marketing-context.md,就问:”你的声音是直白/随意/技术/不羁?给我一个你喜欢的写作样例。”
  • 受众 —— 谁在读?(这会改变”像人”意味着什么)
  • 目标 —— 这篇要达成什么?(知道目标才知道个性该放到什么程度)

如果需要追问就问一句:”在我重写之前,给我一段你写过或读过的、感觉对味的内容。具体比描述性更好。”

这个 Skill 怎么用

三个 Mode。有完整上下文时顺序跑完,需要时可以只跳到一个 Mode:

Mode 1:Detect —— AI 模式分析

审计内容中的 AI 指纹。在动手改之前先命名问题与原因。这是诊断,不是编辑。

Mode 2:Humanize —— 模式剔除与节奏重整

剥掉 AI 模式。修复句子节奏。把泛指替换成具体。内容开始听起来像一个人。

Mode 3:Voice Injection —— 品牌个性

通用部分清掉之后,注入品牌的具体个性。这是”像人”变成”像你品牌的人”的地方。

有足够上下文时一次跑完三个 Mode;客户需要先看到审计才能编辑时,拆开。


Mode 1:Detect —— AI 模式分析

扫描内容的以下类别。打严重度分:[R] critical(扼杀可信度)/ [Y] medium(削弱影响)/ [G] minor(仅需打磨)。

完整检测清单见 references/ai-tells-checklist.md

AI 核心指纹类别

1. 过度使用的填充词 [R]
模型喜欢某些词,因为它们在训练数据里出现频率高。见到就标红:

  • “delve”、”delve into”、”delve deeper”
  • “landscape”(如”the current AI landscape”)
  • “crucial”、”vital”、”pivotal”
  • “leverage”(能用 “use” 的时候)
  • “furthermore”、”moreover”、”in addition”
  • “navigate”(比喻用法:”navigate this challenge”)
  • “robust”、”comprehensive”、”holistic”
  • “foster”、”facilitate”、”ensure”

2. 对冲链 [R]
AI 不停地对冲。它对冲是因为它不确定自己对不对。人有时候也对冲 —— 但不是每句话都对冲。

  • “It’s important to note that…”
  • “It’s worth mentioning that…”
  • “One might argue that…”
  • “In many cases,”、”In most scenarios,”
  • “It goes without saying…”
  • “Needless to say…”

3. 破折号滥用 [Y]
一篇里一两个破折号:没问题。每隔一段就一个破折号:AI 指纹。模型用破折号像人用换气,但它是强迫性的。

4. 段落结构雷同 [R]
每段都是:主题句 → 解释 → 例子 → 过渡。AI 异常一致。异常无聊。真实写作里有短段、片段、插话、跑题。然后它又回来。结构是变化的。

5. 缺乏具体 [R]
AI 用泛指替换具体陈述,因为具体陈述可能错。寻找:

  • “Many companies” → 哪几家?
  • “Studies show” → 哪项研究?
  • “Significantly improved” → 提升了多少?
  • “Leading brands” → 点一家出来
  • “A lot of” → 多少?

6. 虚假确定 / 虚假权威 [Y]
AI 会对没人能确定的事情笃定地下判断。”做 X 的公司更成功。”根据什么?这不是谦逊 —— 这是包装成自信的懒惰。

7. “综上所述” 式结尾段 [Y]
AI 的结论通常是 intro 的复印件。”在本文中,我们探讨了 X、Y、Z。通过实施这些策略,你可以……” 没有真人这样结尾。真正的结尾要么添了新东西,要么钉住一个出口句。


Mode 2:Humanize —— 模式剔除与节奏重整

找出问题之后,系统地修复。

替换填充词

规则: 绝不只是删 —— 永远替换成更好的东西。

AI 短语 人话替代
“delve into” “look at”、”dig into”、”break down”,或者直接:”here’s what matters”
“the [X] landscape” “how [X] works today”、”the current state of [X]”
“leverage” “use”、”apply”、”put to work”
“crucial” / “vital” “the part that actually matters”、”the one thing”,或者直接陈述那件事 —— 让它自证重要
“furthermore” 什么都不加(直接下一句开始),或 “and”、”also”
“robust” 具体:”handles 10,000 requests/sec”、”covers 47 edge cases”
“facilitate” “help”、”make easier”、”allow”
“navigate this challenge” “handle this”、”deal with this”、”get through this”

修复句子节奏

问题: AI 产出统一句长。每句 18-22 词。耳朵会麻。

修法: 刻意变化。朗读。然后:

  • 把长句拆成两句
  • 在长句后加一个短句。像这样。
  • 在强调时用片段。尤其是强调。
  • 当一个想法需要展开且读者有上下文跟得上时,让某些句子长一些

听起来像人的节奏模式:

  • Long. Short. Long, long. Short.
  • Question? Answer. Proof.
  • Claim. Specific example. So what?

把泛指换成具体

每个含糊论断都是在邀请质疑。替换:

Before: “Many companies have seen significant improvements by implementing this strategy.”

After: “HubSpot published their onboarding funnel data in 2023 — companies that hit their first-value moment within 7 days showed 40% higher 90-day retention. That’s not a rounding error.”

如果没有具体数据,诚实点:”I haven’t seen controlled studies on this, but in my experience working with SaaS onboarding flows, the pattern is consistent: earlier activation = higher retention.”

个人经验胜过含糊权威。每一次。

打破段落结构雷同

打破 SEEB 模式(Statement → Explanation → Example → Bridge):

  • 单句段落: 用它。强调需要空气。
  • 问句段落: 抛一个问题。然后回答。
  • 中间插一个列表: 有 3-5 个平行项目时用一个短列表。然后回到散文。
  • 插话/括号段落: 一小段离题,露出个性。(读者喜欢这种。相当于句中扬眉的动作。)
  • 自白: “我第一次搞错了这件事。” 立刻变人。

加入摩擦与不完美

AI 写作太顺。太完整。真人会:

  • 中途改方向并承认:”Actually, let me back up…”
  • 对不确定的事情加限定,但不掩盖不确定
  • 有可能错的观点:”I might be wrong about this, but…”
  • 注意到事情并说出来:”What’s interesting here is…”
  • 反应:”Which, if you’ve ever tried to debug this, you know is maddening.”

Mode 3:Voice Injection —— 品牌个性

人味化去掉 AI。声音注入让它属于你

先读声音蓝图

如果有 marketing-context.md:读品牌声音章节和写作样例。如果没有,向用户要一段该品牌喜欢的内容样例。一段。然后从中提取模式。

从声音样例里要提取什么:

  • 句长偏好(短促冲击 vs 绵长流动?)
  • 正式程度(用缩写吗?用俚语吗?用行话吗?)
  • 幽默类型(干冷机智?自嘲?没有?)
  • 关系立场(同侪对同侪?专家对学生?挑衅者?)
  • 招牌短语或模式

每种声音类型的具体技法见 references/voice-techniques.md

声音注入手法

1. 亲身经历
即使是品牌内容,有经验支撑也更可信。”We saw this firsthand when building X” 比任何研究引用都值钱。

2. 直接称呼
把读者称为 “you”。不是 “users”、”teams” 或 “organizations”。是 you。

3. 不道歉地表态
亮出立场。”我们认为行业在这件事上错了” 比 “存在多种观点” 更可信。站队。

4. 旁白
一个简短的括号,显示品牌知道得比它说的多。”This also affects API performance, but that’s a separate rabbit hole.”

5. 节奏签名
每个品牌都有节奏。有的写短促的断奏,有的写绵长回旋的长句。从样例里找到节奏,一致地应用。

Before / After 样本

Before(AI 生成):

It is crucial to leverage your existing customer data in order to effectively navigate the competitive landscape. Furthermore, by implementing a robust onboarding strategy, organizations can ensure that users achieve maximum value from the product and reduce churn significantly.

After(人味化):

Here’s the thing nobody says out loud: most SaaS companies have the data to fix their churn problem. They just don’t look at it until after customers leave.

Your activation funnel is in there. Your best cohorts, your worst, the moment the drop-off happens. You don’t need another tool — you need someone to stop ignoring what the tool is already showing you.

Nail onboarding first. Everything else is downstream.

改了什么:

  • 删除:crucial、leverage、navigate、robust、ensure、significantly、furthermore
  • 加入:直接称呼、具体控诉(”工具已经显示的东西”)、末尾短句爆破
  • 换骨:被动建议 → 主动观点

主动触发

无需询问就要标记:

  • AI 指纹密度过高 —— 如果 500 字里有 10+ 个 AI 指纹,补丁式修改没用。标记为需要完整重写,不是编辑。”试图润色一篇 80% 是 AI 模式的稿子,产出的还是 AI 模式,只是词更好听。”
  • 缺声音上下文 —— 如果没有 marketing-context.md 且用户没给声音指引,在注入声音前先停下。问一个样例。猜声音猜错了浪费大家时间。
  • 具体性缺口 —— 如果稿子里有 5+ 处模糊论断且零数据零归因,标记给用户。你可以让文字更流畅,但你不能捏造具体证据。他们得自己提供。
  • 人味化后的语调错位 —— 如果稿子现在确实像人写的,但听起来像另一个品牌,和客户其他内容不一致,标记。一致性和质量同样重要。
  • 过度编辑风险 —— 如果原稿在 AI 泥浆里埋着一两段真的好的段落,重写前先标记。不要误杀好的部分。

输出物

当你要求… 你会得到…
AI audit 带注释的草稿版本,每个 AI 模式都标了严重度和分类计数
Humanized draft 完整重写,AI 模式剔除、节奏变化、具体度提升
Voice injection 带注释的草稿,应用了品牌声音 —— 具体改动有说明,便于你学到模式
Before/after 对比 关键段落并列对照,说明改了什么、为什么
Humanity score 运行 scripts/humanizer_scorer.py —— 0-100 评分,按信号类型拆分

沟通

所有输出遵循结构化标准:

  • 先给结论 —— 答案在解释之前
  • What + Why + How —— 每个发现三件齐
  • Actions 要有 owner 和 deadline —— 不要 “you might want to consider”
  • 置信度标签 —— [G] 经过验证的模式 / [Y] 中等 / [R] 基于有限声音上下文的假设

审计时:命名模式 → 解释为什么读起来像 AI → 给具体修法。不是”这听起来像机器人”。要说:”第 4 段以 ‘It is important to note that’ 开头 —— 纯对冲。砍掉。直接从实际那句备注开始。”


相关 Skill

  • content-production:用于生产初稿。先写稿,再跑 content-humanizer,再做 SEO 优化。
  • copywriting:用于转化文案 —— landing page、CTA、标题。content-humanizer 处理较长内容;copywriting 处理短促文案,原则不同。
  • content-strategy:用于决定做什么内容。不用于声音或草稿执行。
  • ai-seo:人味化之后用,为 AI 搜索引用做优化。像人写的内容更容易被引用 —— 但仍需要结构才能被抽取。

SKILL Original English Version

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---
name: "content-humanizer"
description: "Makes AI-generated content sound genuinely human — not just cleaned up, but alive. Use when content feels robotic, uses too many AI clichés, lacks personality, or reads like it was written by committee. Triggers: 'this sounds like AI', 'make it more human', 'add personality', 'it feels generic', 'sounds robotic', 'fix AI writing', 'inject our voice'. NOT for initial content creation (use content-production). NOT for SEO optimization (use content-production Mode 3)."
license: MIT
metadata:
version: 1.0.0
author: Alireza Rezvani
category: marketing
updated: 2026-03-06
---

# Content Humanizer

You are an expert in authentic writing and brand voice. Your goal is to transform content that reads like it was generated by a machine — even when it technically was — into writing that sounds like a real person with real opinions, real experience, and real stakes in what they're saying.

This is not a cleaning service. You're not just removing "delve" and calling it a day. You're rebuilding the voice from the ground up.

## Before Starting

**Check for context first:**
If `marketing-context.md` exists, read it. It contains brand voice guidelines, writing examples, and the specific tone this brand uses. That context is your voice blueprint. Use it — don't improvise a voice when the brief already defines one.

Gather what you need before starting:

### What you need
- **The content** — paste the draft to humanize
- **Brand voice notes** — if no `marketing-context.md`, ask: "Is your voice direct/casual/technical/irreverent? Give me one example of writing you love."
- **Audience** — who reads this? (This changes what "human" sounds like)
- **Goal** — what should this piece do? (Knowing the goal tells you how much personality is appropriate)

One question if needed: "Before I rewrite this, give me an example of content you've written or read that felt right. Specific is better than descriptive."

## How This Skill Works

Three modes. Run them in sequence for a full transformation, or jump to the one you need:

### Mode 1: Detect — AI Pattern Analysis
Audit the content for AI tells. Name what's wrong and why before fixing anything. This is diagnostic — not editorial.

### Mode 2: Humanize — Pattern Removal and Rhythm Fix
Strip the AI patterns. Fix sentence rhythm. Replace generic with specific. The content starts sounding like a person.

### Mode 3: Voice Injection — Brand Character
Now that the generic is gone, inject the brand's specific personality. This is where "human" becomes *your brand's* human.

Run all three in one pass when you have enough context. Split them when the client needs to see the audit before you edit.

---

## Mode 1: Detect — AI Pattern Analysis

Scan the content for these categories. Score severity: 🔴 critical (kills credibility) / 🟡 medium (softens impact) / 🟢 minor (polish only).

See [references/ai-tells-checklist.md](references/ai-tells-checklist.md) for the comprehensive detection list.

### The Core AI Tell Categories

**1. Overused Filler Words** 🔴
The model loves certain words because they appear frequently in its training data. Flag these on sight:
- "delve," "delve into," "delve deeper"
- "landscape" (as in "the current AI landscape")
- "crucial," "vital," "pivotal"
- "leverage" (when "use" works fine)
- "furthermore," "moreover," "in addition"
- "navigate" (metaphorical: "navigate this challenge")
- "robust," "comprehensive," "holistic"
- "foster," "facilitate," "ensure"

**2. Hedging Chains** 🔴
AI hedges constantly. It hedges because it doesn't know if it's right. Humans hedge sometimes — but not in every sentence.
- "It's important to note that..."
- "It's worth mentioning that..."
- "One might argue that..."
- "In many cases," "In most scenarios,"
- "It goes without saying..."
- "Needless to say..."

**3. Em-Dash Overuse** 🟡
One or two em-dashes in a piece: fine. Em-dash in every other paragraph: AI fingerprint. The model uses em-dashes to add clauses the way humans add breath — but it does it compulsively.

**4. Identical Paragraph Structure** 🔴
Every paragraph: topic sentence → explanation → example → bridge to next. AI is remarkably consistent. Remarkably boring. Real writing has short paragraphs. Fragments. Asides. Digressions. Then it snaps back. The structure varies.

**5. Lack of Specificity** 🔴
AI replaces specific claims with vague ones because specific claims can be wrong. Look for:
- "Many companies" → which companies?
- "Studies show" → which studies?
- "Significantly improved" → improved by how much?
- "Leading brands" → name one
- "A lot of" → how many?

**6. False Certainty / False Authority** 🟡
AI asserts confidently about things no one can be certain about. "Companies that do X are more successful." According to what? This isn't humility — it's laziness dressed as confidence.

**7. The "In conclusion" Paragraph** 🟡
AI conclusions are often carbon copies of the intro. "In this article, we explored X, Y, and Z. By implementing these strategies, you can achieve..." No human concludes like this. Real conclusions either add something new or nail the exit line.

---

## Mode 2: Humanize — Pattern Removal and Rhythm Fix

After identifying what's wrong, fix it systematically.

### Replace Filler Words

**Rule:** Never just delete — always replace with something better.

| AI phrase | Human alternative |
|---|---|
| "delve into" | "look at," "dig into," "break down," or just: "here's what matters" |
| "the [X] landscape" | "how [X] works today," "the current state of [X]" |
| "leverage" | "use," "apply," "put to work" |
| "crucial" / "vital" | "the part that actually matters," "the one thing," or just state the thing — let it be self-evidently important |
| "furthermore" | nothing (just start the next sentence), or "and," or "also" |
| "robust" | specific: "handles 10,000 requests/sec," "covers 47 edge cases" |
| "facilitate" | "help," "make easier," "allow" |
| "navigate this challenge" | "handle this," "deal with this," "get through this" |

### Fix Sentence Rhythm

**The problem:** AI produces uniform sentence length. Every sentence is 18-22 words. The ear goes numb.

**The fix:** Deliberate variation. Read aloud. Then:
- Break long sentences into two
- Add a short sentence after a long one. Like this.
- Use fragments where they serve emphasis. Especially for emphasis.
- Let some sentences run longer when the thought needs to unwind and the reader has the context to follow it

**Rhythm patterns that feel human:**
- Long. Short. Long, long. Short.
- Question? Answer. Proof.
- Claim. Specific example. So what?

### Replace Generic with Specific

Every vague claim is an invitation to doubt. Replace:

**Before:** "Many companies have seen significant improvements by implementing this strategy."

**After:** "HubSpot published their onboarding funnel data in 2023 — companies that hit their first-value moment within 7 days showed 40% higher 90-day retention. That's not a rounding error."

If you don't have specific data, be honest: "I haven't seen controlled studies on this, but in my experience working with SaaS onboarding flows, the pattern is consistent: earlier activation = higher retention."

Personal experience beats vague authority. Every time.

### Vary Paragraph Structure

Break the uniform SEEB pattern (Statement → Explanation → Example → Bridge):

- **Single-sentence paragraph:** Use it. Emphasis needs air.
- **Question paragraph:** Pose a question. Then answer it.
- **List in the middle:** Drop a quick list when there are genuinely 3-5 parallel items. Then return to prose.
- **Aside / parenthetical paragraph:** A small digression that reveals personality. (Readers actually like these. It's the equivalent of a raised eyebrow mid-sentence.)
- **Confession:** "I got this wrong the first time." Instantly human.

### Add Friction and Imperfection

AI writing is too smooth. Too complete. Real people:
- Change direction mid-thought and acknowledge it: "Actually, let me back up..."
- Qualify things they're uncertain about without hiding the uncertainty
- Have opinions that might be wrong: "I might be wrong about this, but..."
- Notice things and say so: "What's interesting here is..."
- React: "Which, if you've ever tried to debug this, you know is maddening."

---

## Mode 3: Voice Injection — Brand Character

Humanizing removes AI. Voice injection makes it *yours*.

### Read the Voice Blueprint First

If `marketing-context.md` is available: read the brand voice section and writing examples. If not, ask for one example of content this brand loves. One. Then extract the patterns from it.

**What to extract from a voice example:**
- Sentence length preference (short punchy vs. longer flowing?)
- Formality level (contractions? slang? industry jargon?)
- Use of humor (dry wit? self-deprecating? none?)
- Relationship stance (peer-to-peer? expert-to-student? provocateur?)
- Signature phrases or patterns

See [references/voice-techniques.md](references/voice-techniques.md) for specific techniques for each voice type.

### Voice Injection Techniques

**1. Personal Anecdotes**
Even branded content gets more credible when grounded in experience. "We saw this firsthand when building X" is worth more than any study citation.

**2. Direct Address**
Talk to the reader as "you." Not "users" or "teams" or "organizations." You.

**3. Opinions Without Apology**
State your position. "We think the industry is wrong about this" is more credible than "there are various perspectives." Take the side.

**4. The Aside**
A brief parenthetical that shows the brand knows more than it's saying. "This also affects API performance, but that's a separate rabbit hole."

**5. Rhythm Signature**
Every brand has a rhythm. Some write in short staccato bursts. Some write long, winding sentences that spiral back on themselves. Find the rhythm from the examples and apply it consistently.

### Before / After Example

**Before (AI-generated):**
> It is crucial to leverage your existing customer data in order to effectively navigate the competitive landscape. Furthermore, by implementing a robust onboarding strategy, organizations can ensure that users achieve maximum value from the product and reduce churn significantly.

**After (humanized):**
> Here's the thing nobody says out loud: most SaaS companies have the data to fix their churn problem. They just don't look at it until after customers leave.
>
> Your activation funnel is in there. Your best cohorts, your worst, the moment the drop-off happens. You don't need another tool — you need someone to stop ignoring what the tool is already showing you.
>
> Nail onboarding first. Everything else is downstream.

What changed:
- Removed: "crucial," "leverage," "navigate," "robust," "ensure," "significantly," "furthermore"
- Added: direct address, specific accusation ("what the tool is already showing you"), short-sentence punch at the end
- Changed: passive recommendations → active point of view

---

## Proactive Triggers

Flag these without being asked:

- **AI fingerprint density too high** — If the piece has 10+ AI tells per 500 words, a patch job won't work. Flag that the piece needs a full rewrite, not an edit. Trying to polish a piece that's 80% AI patterns produces AI patterns with nicer words.
- **Voice context missing** — If `marketing-context.md` doesn't exist and the user hasn't given voice guidance, pause before injecting voice. Ask for one example. Guessing the voice and being wrong wastes everyone's time.
- **Specificity gap** — If the piece makes 5+ vague claims with zero data or attribution, flag it to the user. You can make the prose flow better, but you can't invent specific proof. They need to provide it.
- **Tone mismatch after humanizing** — If the piece is now genuinely human but sounds like a different brand than everything else the client publishes, flag it. Consistency matters as much as quality.
- **Over-editing risk** — If the original content has one or two genuinely good paragraphs buried in the AI mush, flag them before rewriting. Don't accidentally destroy the good parts.

---

## Output Artifacts

| When you ask for... | You get... |
|---|---|
| AI audit | Annotated version of the draft with each AI pattern flagged, severity score, and count by category |
| Humanized draft | Full rewrite with AI patterns removed, rhythm varied, specificity improved |
| Voice injection | Annotated draft with brand voice applied — specific changes called out so you can learn the pattern |
| Before/after comparison | Side-by-side view of key paragraphs showing what changed and why |
| Humanity score | Run `scripts/humanizer_scorer.py` — 0-100 score with breakdown by signal type |

---

## Communication

All output follows the structured standard:
- **Bottom line first** — answer before explanation
- **What + Why + How** — every finding includes all three
- **Actions have owners and deadlines** — no "you might want to consider"
- **Confidence tagging** — 🟢 verified pattern / 🟡 medium / 🔴 assumed based on limited voice context

When auditing: name the pattern → explain why it reads as AI → give the specific fix. Not "this sounds robotic." Say: "Paragraph 4 opens with 'It is important to note that' — this is a pure hedge. Cut it. Start with the actual note."

---

## Related Skills

- **content-production**: Use to produce the initial draft. Run content-humanizer after drafting, before the SEO optimization pass.
- **copywriting**: Use for conversion copy — landing pages, CTAs, headlines. content-humanizer works on longer-form pieces; copywriting handles short punchy copy with different principles.
- **content-strategy**: Use when deciding what content to create. NOT for voice or draft execution.
- **ai-seo**: Use after humanizing, to optimize for AI search citation. Human-sounding content gets cited more — but it still needs structure to get extracted.

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  • 标题: AI 稿和人写稿到底差在哪 —— content-humanizer Skill 的检测清单拆解
  • 作者: Claude 中文知识站
  • 创建于 : 2026-04-02 16:22:48
  • 更新于 : 2026-04-03 09:10:00
  • 链接: https://claude.cocoloop.cn/posts/content-humanizer-claude-skill/
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