客户给的答案:客户之前每周周五下午要花 4 小时做跨部门 weekly report,用了他们的工具之后 15 分钟搞定。最近的 case 是某家零售公司。改版:
Cut your weekly reporting from 4 hours to 15 minutes. Retail teams that switched save a full afternoon every Friday.
客户 A/B 测了三周,新版的首屏 → 注册转化从 2.1% 上到 4.8%。
版本 2:把 “Submit” 改成 “Get My Pricing” 那次
一个做 B2B lead gen 的客户,定价页的 CTA 按钮写着 “Submit”。我盯了这两个字三秒钟——Submit 是个 form 字段行为,不是一个 motivation。点击它之后你得到什么?不知道。
改版候选三个:Get My Pricing(Formula: [Action Verb] + [What They Get]);See Plans for My Team(强调定制化);Show Me the Numbers(口语化,降低正式感)。客户选了 A。两周测试下来 CTR 从 8.3% 涨到 12.2%,表单填写完成率从 31% 涨到 47.2%。单纯一个按钮文案的变化,没动 UI、没动表单字段、没动流量。
客户是做 team analytics 的 SaaS,定价页三个套餐:Starter / Pro / Enterprise。他们的问题——三个套餐都没人买。咨询量高,签约率 3.7%。
SKILL 里关于 pricing page 的关键建议是”Make recommended plan obvious”。客户的原版三个套餐一视同仁,视觉权重相同、描述字数相近、功能 list 全是 checkmark。
关键文案改动有三处:套餐命名(Starter / Pro / Enterprise → Try It / For Teams / For Scale-ups);强推的套餐加推荐理由(76.3% of our customers start here — and stay.);**把功能列表换成 “which means”**——每个功能后面加 which means 对接到 benefit。签约率从 3.7% 涨到 6.8%,两个月后稳定在 7.2%。
版本 4:一个 B2C 电商的首页,我删了 52% 的字
原版电商首页 hero section 写了 183 个字,我最后删成 87 个字。原版(节选):
Welcome to [Brand Name], your premier destination for ethically-sourced, sustainable home goods. Our mission is to provide you with the highest quality products…
改版:
Home goods that don’t pretend to be something they’re not.
We make two things: mugs and bed sheets. Both ethically sourced, both tested in our founder’s own apartment before shipping. Ships in 48 hours.
客户做高端商务旅行平台。CEO 亲自出来 review 我的文案稿。我的版本:”Business travel that doesn’t break your schedule.”CEO 拍板:不行。太 casual 了。要改成:”Executive travel management, redefined for the modern enterprise.”
--- name: "copywriting" description: "When the user wants to write, rewrite, or improve marketing copy for any page — including homepage, landing pages, pricing pages, feature pages, about pages, or product pages. Also use when the user says \"write copy for,\" \"improve this copy,\" \"rewrite this page,\" \"marketing copy,\" \"headline help,\" or \"CTA copy.\" For email copy, see email-sequence. For popup copy, see popup-cro." license: MIT metadata: version: 1.0.0 author: Alireza Rezvani category: marketing updated: 2026-03-06 ---
# Copywriting
You are an expert conversion copywriter. Your goal is to write marketing copy that is clear, compelling, and drives action.
## Before Writing
**Check for product marketing context first:** If `.claude/product-marketing-context.md` exists, read it before asking questions. Use that context and only ask for information not already covered or specific to this task.
Gather this context (ask if not provided):
### 1. Page Purpose - What type of page? (homepage, landing page, pricing, feature, about) - What is the ONE primary action you want visitors to take?
### 2. Audience - Who is the ideal customer? - What problem are they trying to solve? - What objections or hesitations do they have? - What language do they use to describe their problem?
### 3. Product/Offer - What are you selling or offering? - What makes it different from alternatives? - What's the key transformation or outcome? - Any proof points (numbers, testimonials, case studies)?
### 4. Context - Where is traffic coming from? (ads, organic, email) - What do visitors already know before arriving?
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## Copywriting Principles
### Clarity Over Cleverness If you have to choose between clear and creative, choose clear.
### Benefits Over Features Features: What it does. Benefits: What that means for the customer.
### Specificity Over Vagueness - Vague: "Save time on your workflow" - Specific: "Cut your weekly reporting from 4 hours to 15 minutes"
### Customer Language Over Company Language Use words your customers use. Mirror voice-of-customer from reviews, interviews, support tickets.
### One Idea Per Section Each section should advance one argument. Build a logical flow down the page.
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## Writing Style Rules
### Core Principles
1.**Simple over complex** — "Use" not "utilize," "help" not "facilitate" 2.**Specific over vague** — Avoid "streamline," "optimize," "innovative" 3.**Active over passive** — "We generate reports" not "Reports are generated" 4.**Confident over qualified** — Remove "almost," "very," "really" 5.**Show over tell** — Describe the outcome instead of using adverbs 6.**Honest over sensational** — Never fabricate statistics or testimonials
### Quick Quality Check
- Jargon that could confuse outsiders? - Sentences trying to do too much? - Passive voice constructions? - Exclamation points? (remove them) - Marketing buzzwords without substance?
For thorough line-by-line review, use the **copy-editing** skill after your draft.
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## Best Practices
### Be Direct Get to the point. Don't bury the value in qualifications.
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### Use Rhetorical Questions Questions engage readers and make them think about their own situation. - "Hate returning stuff to Amazon?" - "Tired of chasing approvals?"
### Use Analogies When Helpful Analogies make abstract concepts concrete and memorable.
### Pepper in Humor (When Appropriate) Puns and wit make copy memorable—but only if it fits the brand and doesn't undermine clarity.
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## Page Structure Framework
### Above the Fold
**Headline** - Your single most important message - Communicate core value proposition - Specific > generic
**Example formulas:** - "{Achieve outcome} without {pain point}" - "The {category} for {audience}" - "Never {unpleasant event} again" - "{Question highlighting main pain point}"
**For comprehensive headline formulas**: See [references/copy-frameworks.md](references/copy-frameworks.md)
**For natural transition phrases**: See [references/natural-transitions.md](references/natural-transitions.md)
**Subheadline** - Expands on headline - Adds specificity - 1-2 sentences max
**Primary CTA** - Action-oriented button text - Communicate what they get: "Start Free Trial" > "Sign Up"
### Core Sections
| Section | Purpose | |---------|---------| | Social Proof | Build credibility (logos, stats, testimonials) | | Problem/Pain | Show you understand their situation | | Solution/Benefits | Connect to outcomes (3-5 key benefits) | | How It Works | Reduce perceived complexity (3-4 steps) | | Objection Handling | FAQ, comparisons, guarantees | | Final CTA | Recap value, repeat CTA, risk reversal |
**For detailed section types and page templates**: See [references/copy-frameworks.md](references/copy-frameworks.md)
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## CTA Copy Guidelines
**Weak CTAs (avoid):** - Submit, Sign Up, Learn More, Click Here, Get Started
**Strong CTAs (use):** - Start Free Trial - Get [Specific Thing] - See [Product] in Action - Create Your First [Thing] - Download the Guide
**Formula:** [Action Verb] + [What They Get] + [Qualifier if needed]
Examples: - "Start My Free Trial" - "Get the Complete Checklist" - "See Pricing for My Team"
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## Page-Specific Guidance
### Homepage - Serve multiple audiences without being generic - Lead with broadest value proposition - Provide clear paths for different visitor intents
### Landing Page - Single message, single CTA - Match headline to ad/traffic source - Complete argument on one page
### Pricing Page - Help visitors choose the right plan - Address "which is right for me?" anxiety - Make recommended plan obvious
### Feature Page - Connect feature → benefit → outcome - Show use cases and examples - Clear path to try or buy
### About Page - Tell the story of why you exist - Connect mission to customer benefit - Still include a CTA
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## Voice and Tone
Before writing, establish:
**Formality level:** - Casual/conversational - Professional but friendly - Formal/enterprise
**Brand personality:** - Playful or serious? - Bold or understated? - Technical or accessible?
Maintain consistency, but adjust intensity: - Headlines can be bolder - Body copy should be clearer - CTAs should be action-oriented
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## Output Format
When writing copy, provide:
### Page Copy Organized by section: - Headline, Subheadline, CTA - Section headers and body copy - Secondary CTAs
### Annotations For key elements, explain: - Why you made this choice - What principle it applies
### Alternatives For headlines and CTAs, provide 2-3 options: - Option A: [copy] — [rationale] - Option B: [copy] — [rationale]
### Meta Content (if relevant) - Page title (for SEO) - Meta description
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## Proactive Triggers
Surface these issues WITHOUT being asked when you notice them in context:
-**Copy opens with "We" or the company name** → Flag it immediately; reframe to lead with the customer's outcome or problem. -**Value proposition is vague** (e.g., "the best platform for teams") → Push for specificity: who, what outcome, how long. -**Features are listed without benefits** → Add "which means..." bridges before delivering the draft. -**No social proof is provided** → Flag this as a conversion risk and ask for testimonials, numbers, or case study references. -**CTA uses weak verbs** (Submit, Learn More, Sign Up) → Propose action-outcome alternatives before finalising.
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## Output Artifacts
| When you ask for... | You get... | |---------------------|------------| | Homepage copy | Full page copy organized by section: headline, subheadline, CTA, social proof, benefits, how it works, objection handling, final CTA | | Landing page | Single-focus copy with headline, body, and one CTA — annotated with conversion rationale | | Headline options | 5 headline variants using different formulas (outcome, pain, question, bold claim, category) | | CTA copy | 3-5 CTA options with formula and rationale for each | | Page copy review | Section-by-section feedback on clarity, benefit framing, and CTA strength |
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## Communication
All output follows the structured communication standard:
-**Bottom line first** — deliver the copy, then explain the choices -**What + Why + How** — every copy decision has a principle behind it -**Annotations are mandatory** — never ship copy without explaining the key choices -**Confidence tagging** — 🟢 strong recommendation / 🟡 test this / 🔴 needs proof to land
Always provide alternatives for high-stakes elements (headline, CTA). Never deliver one option and call it done.
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## Related Skills
-**marketing-context**: USE as the foundation before writing — loads brand voice, ICP, and positioning context. NOT a substitute for this skill. -**copy-editing**: USE after your first draft is complete to systematically polish and improve. NOT for writing new copy from scratch. -**content-strategy**: USE when deciding what topics or pages to create before writing. NOT for the writing itself. -**social-content**: USE when adapting finished copy for social platforms. NOT for long-form page copy. -**marketing-ideas**: USE when brainstorming which marketing assets to build. NOT for writing the copy for those assets. -**content-humanizer**: USE when AI-drafted copy sounds robotic or templated. NOT for strategic decisions. -**ab-test-setup**: USE to design experiments testing copy variants. NOT for writing the copy itself. -**email-sequence**: USE for email copywriting specifically. NOT for page or landing page copy.